Happy memories .. What I have of them is very few
I tried to chase these dark thoughts away
But they keep hunting me everyday
I have nowhere to run
No place to go
Hiding from the sun
Trying to break through
Life feels so wrong
I don't feel like I belong
All I see is emptiness
All I hear is silence
And it's tearing me apart
To see that darkness taking a hold of my heart
Am I on the wrong lane?
Or am I just going insain?
5 comments:
awesome as always.
keep it up lona!!
good writing. since first time i was here I knew that you are an artist
@Abdo91: tnk u so much dear so sweet of u to pass by:)
@A.Adam: tnx alot I apprciate it :)
soooooo nice lona
last two lines are so wonderful
i'm very lucky to have this lona as my lovely friend
I can see a lot of passion adn raw emotion in your writing and I also see a lot of natural talent. what I wonder is how you would do to step outside of your comfort zone...write something that is not dark. You are great at what you have written. challenge yourself to grow as a writer - if you cant write about sun shiny days (which is not necessarily good content anyway) try to write about something you saw or observed in someone else. maybe a small smile a mother gave her child or a stranger gave to another stranger that impacted your heart and created a temporary warmth in your life - even for a second. maybe write about hope of humanity getting better - how can it get better - by listening to children.
I see your have great talent. Now grow in your writing and conquer the world! you are going to do great things and influence other people in a way that not everyone does. you are one of the special people on this earth that can empathize with the human race and lift it up through your thoughts and words.
I look forward to seeing you grow.
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